"Oh crap! No I'm going to be late again"..Said Amber
Amber threw on her clothes grabbed her neon green book bag,and rushed out of her bedroom door.
Amber began running down the pearl white stair case.
"Ah well good morning sleepy head", Said Amber's mom
"Mom", Said Amber with a tint of frustration
Amber began running threw the kitchen tripping on the light brown chair,catching herself just before hitting the linoleum floor.Amber jumped up as to not be any later than she already was,leaned over the dinning room table scratching up a piece of half buttered half burnt toast that her mother had made earlier that morning for breakfast
"Wait hone-"said her mother.
But it was to late Amber had already left slamming the stained glass door behind her.
"Oh well",Said Amber's mother
Going back to the article she had been reading just moments before
"Hi mom"
Amber's mom looked up from the news paper article once more to see her son Mickel walk in.
"Oh hi Sweet would you like some breakfast?"
"Nuh!",Stated Mickel
"Hey mom where did Amber go,I could of sworn I heard her getting up a few minutes ago!",Said Mickel
"She forgot it was Saturday again and she ran to the bus stop",Said Amber's mom
"Hey mom!".said Mickel
"Yes.",Amber's mom said back
"Is there something wrong with Mrs.lose-a-lots",Said Mickel in a silly sarcastic tone.
"Hey don't talk about your sister like that",Began his mother
"You know that she is under a lot of pressure",Said his mother
Mickel began to sit in the light brown chair that amber had triped in earlier that morning.
But then Amber came barging in the front door.
"You know you could of told me it was Saturday"I tried to but-"You were going to be late",Said her mother Sarcastically.
Mickel giggled trying hard to keep his sister from hearing him.
"And you you little twarp I'm going to pound you!Said Amber
"For what?What did i do this time?"
"Oh don't even act like i didn't just here you snickering at me..It's not funny!"
"I'm sorry!Your rite it's not funny it's freaking hilarious." ha ha Mickel burst out laughing''
"Watch when you get into high school I'm going to do the same thing's to you that you are doing to me."Said Amber"
"Oh yes but the only difference between you and me is that when i do it I'm not going to be running around like a chicken with its head cut off screaming"I'm going to be late I'm going to be late..
"Said Mickel Sarcastically"
"Oh yes like your going to be any better,oh and your rite you wont be running around like a chicken with its head cut off screaming"I'm Going To Be Late I'm Going To Be Late"No your going to be running around like the little brat that you are screaming" I don't have a date i don't have a date.
"All right you to settle down and stop the bickering''Said their mom.
"Well she started it",Said Mickel
"Oh what ever"Said Amber
"If you to don't stop your both going to be grounded"Said their mother
"But I'm sick and tired of her"Said Mickel
"Not one more word and i mean it"Said their mom
"Oh what ever I'm going to my room",Said Amber
she began to walk up the stairs to her room when Amber's mom said
"Oh wait Amber can you do me a huge favor?"Said their mom
"What do you want now"
"I'm tired and frustrated and i want to go and lay down"Said Amber
thanks And send me some more advice o and thanks to those who helped out i really appreciate it
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